Where do I start?! as you can see from the documents I have uploaded, I wrote the essay but it has issues and needs a MAJOR REWRITE including how the Data have been collected and analysed and how much Data have been collected. In the first document (Grading criteria) if you open and look on the right hand side, you’ll see the Examiner’s comments and all of them need to be addressed before submitting the essay again. Here, the Examiner explains why the essay was Failed. The second document is the Essay stylesheet and we are required to follow all the essay guidelines, format in order to pass. Also, the essay must be shortened to strictly 8000 words. Please note; Do not change the topic.
