1- we agreed that the final research question will be Impact of Facebook on consumer purchasing behavior in the growth phase of products. 2- design and structure should be as expected 3- logical flow , ideas should be linked. 4- literature gaps should be expanded. 5- building theoretical frame work . 6- chapter 2 citations and references should be more and more , ideally every sentence should be one or more reference. 7- sources of figures in the dissertation should be addressed ( authors ) 8 – justification of the research ( how did you decide that is a gap . 9- in literature review , you should clarify how did you it is a growth phase ( measurement) 10- executive summery is what was done not how did you conduct the dissertation ( not more than 250 word ) . 11- Analysis was fine . This is the overall situation, Kindly inform me what’s you proposed plan to amend my work perfectly. VIP note : we have to be very very focused and avoid ambiguity , it means adopting surgeons attitude.
