I need to have my paper looked over. Here are the notes from the professor.
This looks like a decent enough paper in terms of its subject matter, but you have quite a number of grammatical and syntactical mistakes here, especially with VERB TENSES, RUN-ON and INCOMPLETE sentences.
Some of these errors may seem insignificant, but the problem is that they distort your arguments throughout the paper by distracting the reader.
For example, the last sentence in your opening paragraph should list the countries in reverse of how you’re listed them, and then you could write, “The 10 hungriest countries in the world in ascending order are the Central African Republic, Yemen, etc.”
