Chinese investments in Israel 1992-2019: Background, pre-conditions and consequences”

Chinese investments in Israel 1992-2019: Background, pre-conditions and consequences”
Thesis needs to be fixed due to the following comments of the supervisor. The thesis is highly descriptive, not well structured and with a weak empirical part. The ‘analysis’ (SWOT analysis which is more of a HBO (university of applied science) tool) lacks depth. The literature review does not include, reflects the discussion on the risk of having Chinese investment (eg. In infrastructure projects on the case of 5G).There is not clear, well defined conceptual model, therefore no clear, in-depth reference to the RQ in the discussion section. How, why and when can Chinese investment in Israel be considered successful?Case selection, not representative and limited number of cases. Most Chinese investments in Israel are in the technology sector, directly in a startup, M&A or through a VC. Reference are often not correct and not in a standard academic reference standard (eg. APA).