1. Please, rewrite this dissertation to be great and very acceptable with considering my professors comments. Also add more sources 2. Please avoid repetition and duplication throughout the research as in my professors comment. 3. Please avoid the informal writing and write in academic way as my professor said and notice this is very important. 4. The quantity and quality of the citation is insufficient. 5. (professor comment) The rest of comments which is in the attached file named professor comments, are very important and I want to you to consider them and look at them very carefully. i would to look for a book name “on Readings in Comparative Health Law by Timothy Jost” my professor ask to talk about it its in the comments as well 6. I want each chapter within 10 days as soon as you finish the chapter please send it to me with revision and I want it conclusive and it meets all instructions as well as grammar, spelling, and so forth. Because I am going to submit it Immediately. 7. There are some particular comments from my professor on each chapter in addition of the general comments that I mentioned. These comments are very important and I want you to consider all of them as shown in the attached file. 8. There are some statements need citations as professor said in the attached file so please cite them and in case you couldnt cite them, then please cite from other resources without leaving the main idea of the statement. 9. professor comments file There is another file contains the dissertation with professors comments, please read it and perform what my professor needs. 10. my comments There is another file i name it its explain__its_important 11. my research question they should consider this panel in ministry of just as not the ministry of health Draft is needed in 10 days.
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