They are asking for more information in the sections on pages 2, 6, 7, 11. The Introduction, Background, Purpose, Research Questions sections do not have enough information. I need more information, more research in these sections. The information that you add to the attached word document, please put your ink in red so I can distinguish what you added. Also, please remember that the resources must be peer-reviewed and within the range of 2014-2019, with free subscriptions to view if someone wanted to look up the reference.
